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The earth crumbles beneath my feet,
And there isn't a bite to eat.


Winter has come and passed, leaving the already scarred lands disabled. Hoofed mammals haven't returned from their migrations southward and the few wolves that inhabit the area are forced to continue stalking small game as a last resort. These too are beginning to disperse, however.

Will today be the day I die?
Or will I miraculously survive?


Tensions are running high. There are only two options left for the wolves: pursue the lengthy search for prosperous lands, or undergo the commands of an incompetent alpha.

I'm getting tired of wondering...


The competition for those basic needs is becoming increasingly violent. Very few are willing to risk the possibility of new lands when there's an adequate pack near. Then again, the alpha is becoming increasingly hostile...

Is this where I'm meant to be?

LATEST NEWS:
-Saturday, March 21st, 09
This message is long overdue, but I'm sure most of you realized that this site is inactive. Sorry to do this, but I just don't see a point anymore. It wasn't even my site to start with and I just don't have the effort to do anything else with it. I ran out of ideas.

So, now that that's outta the way... There've been some good people on here and I don't want to lose contact with you. I'll still come on here from time to time, but if you ever stumble across this site again and want to contact me, you can reach me at my AIM, which is Zydodo, or MSN, which is i_see_stupid_people_1@hotmail
.com. Heh, don't ask.

Anyway, thanks to those who took the time to read this.
Regards,
Zylem


- Saturday, December 6th, 08 Well, the November activity check is now over, and we're now down to 14 members. I dunno what happened to some of the staff, but we should be fine with the 4 of us--Ama, Ria, Carn and myself. As for those who are missing.. well, hopefully nothing has happened to them. On a happier note, it is, of course, December. All the holidays are starting up, so I can understand why the activity may be going down. But I must say, it's on the rise. I'm thinking of a monthly activity check.. or at least one every two months. The next one will probably be after the holidays. Anyway... I also added the 'Open Threads' thing. I'm hoping it will be helpful for newer members. Here's the link: Open Threads. And Ria also gave the idea of having a board for the borders of the pack lands. It'll probably make things easier for newer members, so I'll have to get on that.

Well, that was about all I had to say. Thanks guys for stickin' with me and this site. Happy Holidays.

Regards,
Zylem.


-Tuesday, November 18th, 08 Oh, and almost forgot...
HAPPY FIRST BIRTHDAY CLASH.
Geez, it hardly seems like a year, but believe it or not, it is.
Regards,
Zylem

- Saturday, November 15th, 08 Another monthly update. The recent recession in activity is quite concerning, so.. we're basically starting over.. again.. I'm getting pretty tired of this, but.. *shrug* I dunno what to do with the inactive accounts... Guess we'll just have to wait till the end of the month to delete them in another activity check.. I'll be moving all the threads into the archives... I have deleted the affiliates who have deleted our banner and am advertising again. I dunno what happened to our former staff, but.. I'd like to welcome Ria (AKA Raksha) to the staff team. She's the only one that's still here and is actually helping, so thank you Ria. And any guests reading this.. we welcome you as well. Anyway.. That is pretty much all I have to say. Also, November is a month of remembrance and thanksgiving, so.. just keep that in mind.
Regards,

- Thursday, October 2nd, 08 Hi. Zylem here with your monthly update. *Shifts eyes* Sorry, just had to say that. Anyway... All inactive accounts have been deleted. All inactive threads have been moved. And I will soon create a Pre-Made character board... I've noticed the recent decline in activity... Especially for those who are supposed to be staff. I understand you have lives and all, but I would rather you at least tell me that you're going to be gone... and maybe that the staff position isn't right for you. New members - please join another thread or organize it so you and another member will have a thread together. I've seen it too many times when a promising member joins, then leaves because no one has replied to their thread. So, just to avoid that, please join another thread. If you're wondering what thread to join, ask in the cbox and someone will surely help you. OH, and I've also edited our playlist. It's workin now. And the affiliates have been moved to the main page. So, yeah, I think that's about all I have to say... And be active, goddamn it! Don't make it look like I'm the only one who doesn't have a life...
Kiddin. Anyway... Regards,

- Monday, September 8th, 08 Well, the inactive member countdown is on, unfortunately, but I have given those people many chances to return... I'm sorry, but having inactive members may as well not be members at all. If you do actually return to the site and see that your account has been deleted, feel free to rejoin.. and maybe, y'know, be active. That would be great, so.. Anyway, by the end of this month (because we should all be adjusted to school by then), I will be deleting all accounts that have not signed in within the past month. Yes.. being an admin involves those depressing jobs, sorry to say.

-Tuesday, August 19th 08 Sorry with the frequent updates, but I remembered a few more things to say. There is now a 5-person staff team, in case you didn't notice. There will be no more, unfortunately (even that is a bit too much right now). But those are the people I choose and you better be happy about it. Now, the other thing I wanted to add was.. well, this plot is progressing rather slowly. I mean, I have it all planned out (most of it, anyway), but with the amount of members it isn't goin as fast as it could... Anyway, what I'm tryin to say is, we need mini-plots. You know, just to keep it interestin. So if you have any ideas, post in the rants part of the board. Now, don't be afraid. I'll accept almost anything... Almost...

- Monday, August 18th
2008:
As you've probably heard, the site is no longer adminless. I would just like to thank Frost and Carn, y'know, trying to keep the site alive. Sorry, but you don't really get an award for that. I know. It's unfortunate. We now have a 4-person staff team, including Eyolf/Terry, the not-so-new member. Any new members/guests... don't be afraid to post in the cbox, even though you have many reasons to be *cough*. Anyway... I've also sent out an activity check... the first one, I might add. I've been trying to improve a few things, so now would be a good time to make suggestions. Staff members, you don't need to ask to modify anything on the site, including making your own announcements/ news/etc. But if you're unsure, ask me. Oh, and members, use the OOC board to pass time until... y'know, we get some members back..

- Saturday, August 9th
2008:
Sorry i didnt post this earlier but Zylem has left on vaction and left me(Frost) and Bliss in charge of the site until he returns. if you are new or just need so help then message me or Bliss and we will be glad to help you or listen to any comments you may have Thankiez =] -Frost

- Saturday, June 28th
2008:
In case you haven't noticed, I have set up both the YOTW and the site playlist... Though no one seems to be overly interested, which is fine. I've also done an OCC RPing board. This, on the other hand, looks to have obtained some interest, which is good. It's summer and all, and when I'm not doin' whatever, I'll have alot of time to improve the site (new skin, in case you haven't noticed that either), and am needing suggestions... really. I don't care what they are, and if you have one, even if it puts down what I've done with the site, TELL ME. Thank you.

- Tuesday, June 3rd
2008:
Well... We'll have the YOTW and playlist-thing as soon as I figure out how to get two tables next to each other. Heh.

- Sunday, May 31st
2008:
Okay, well, I've come up with a brilliant idea. We're going to have a YouTube Of The Week (YOTW). Brilliant, isn't it? Yes, I told you it was. And while I'm at it, I'll also add a music playlist-thing. You can find a thread about it in the OOC section as soon as I get to making one.

- Sunday, May 11th:
Yes... I have decided to start over. There isn't much to say, other than, if you wish to help, you can message me. I will create a thread about it as soon as possible.

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IC INFO:
Conditions:
May (Mid-Spring)
17°C (63°F)
Winter has finally come to its end. All snow has dispersed and foliage is in full bloom. The previous yellow grasses are returning to their natural greens colours, while the trees are in the process of recuperation, producing the forests we once knew. With new growth comes new life. Prey, although it may not be much, is rejuvenating in numbers to nourish the wolf population. Expect mostly sunny days, but rain storms are on the rise.
Activity:
Currently, Archon is gathering pack members while trying to keep his old. This isn't working too well for him, however, seeing as his pack has now dwindled to only two members. But as loners continue to wander through, things seem to be looking up for the humble pack. Their high tensions stands in their way, though. If they wish to accept new members, the threesome is going to have to sort out their own problems before they can become a well coordinated and self-sufficient pack.

POP STATS:
Current Alpha: Archon
Member Count: 2
Current Loners: 4
Pending: 5

TOTAL: 12 wolves

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 Plot Description (Rough Draft)
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Ok, well, this is what I came up with. Sorry it took awhile.. I suddenly just started getting ideas so this is what I have so far. I don't think I'll be adding more, just changing it a bit... but I'd like honest opinions.. cause, well, it's an important aspect to gaining members. Shitty plot summaries would probably lead to shitty member counts. And sometimes, even if your site looks shitty, some people will be enticed by a plot summary. So, yeah.. I'll probably add some more advanced wording when I have more time, which will probably be pretty soon if things keep going the way they are. Anyway, without further delay, here is the plot summary. Mind you, I'm not to good with these, so don't expect anything spectacular:

The earth crumbles beneath my feet,
And there isn't a bite to eat.
(Thank Carn for this part. *Points to Carn's message-thing).

Winter has come and passed, leaving the already scarred lands disabled. Hoofed mammals haven't returned from their migrations southward and the few wolves that inhabit the area are forced to continue stalking small game, as a last resort. This too is beginning to disperse, however.

Will today be the day I die?
Or will I miraculously survive?


Tensions are running high. There are only two options left for the wolves: pursue the lengthy search for prosperous lands, or undergo the commands of an incompetent alpha. (Didn't realize this one was so much smaller than the first on paper... may add more to it, if you guys have any ideas)

I'm getting tired of wondering...

The competition for those basic is becoming increasingly violent. Very few are willing to risk the possibility of new lands when there's an adequate pack near. Then again, the alpha is becoming increasingly paranoid... (kinda rushed at the end bit.. might change that part, too)

is this where I'm meant to be?

Ok, so, that's it. Like I said, I'd like your opinions and suggestions to make it better. I doubt I'll turn anything down... Also, vote in the poll and tell me why you chose that option.
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« Reply #1 on Sept 19, 2008, 10:01am »
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Well... since I have gotten absolutely no feed back and am now tired of waiting, I will be making the new ad... If you have a problem with it, well, you should have said something...

I will still appreciate comments of any sort.. And would also appreciate it if at least someone voted in the poll...
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« Reply #2 on Sept 20, 2008, 8:55pm »
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I voted~ And I like the plottage-ness. It's awesomeness.
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« Reply #3 on Sept 21, 2008, 11:32am »
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THANK YOU for voting. It's much appreciated.
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